After completing my third draft it was apparent that it needed re-adjusting in many different ways such as the
- layout of the review: to create an extra horror feel to it
- language : focus on writing from a 3rd person perspective which allows it to fit in with typical film reviews and use language which fits in with horror e.g. ( Oozing, terrorized possessed)
- used of colours : use more darker colours to great a better atmosphere towards the double page spread
I changed the layout slightly by adding more pictures from the film and also increasing the size of them which allowed the audiences to see the pictures more clearly. This allowed the review to stand out a lot more. I also changed the background by using dark grey crinkle paper effect as the background it helped give clued to the setting which was in a school. Also the use of black covering the rest of the page allow information to be withheld and also allure the audiences to read the review and find out what the movie is about and if it is worth watching
I also focused on writing from a third person perspective which gave my work depth and a realistic feel. and also the lettering used is coloured white to stand out over the dark colours and also give out key information to the audience.
Throughout constructing this horror double page spread it allowed me to focus more on the technical written sides of the work rather than the horror effect this is because too much horror effect may distract the audience form reading the text and finding out information regarding the film.
Overall the improvement of this horror film has somewhat been a success as there have been dramatic changes which have highlighted different skills.
I also focused on writing from a third person perspective which gave my work depth and a realistic feel. and also the lettering used is coloured white to stand out over the dark colours and also give out key information to the audience.
Throughout constructing this horror double page spread it allowed me to focus more on the technical written sides of the work rather than the horror effect this is because too much horror effect may distract the audience form reading the text and finding out information regarding the film.
Overall the improvement of this horror film has somewhat been a success as there have been dramatic changes which have highlighted different skills.